Tuesday, 14 February 2012
Valentine For My Husband
Being the first up, I softly close your door,
and creep downstairs,
dog at my heels, panting for attention.
The day is overcast,
church tower, meadows and hills beyond,
shrouded in morning mist,
loom at me through the window,
I feed the dog,
and put the kettle on.
Two teapots stand ready,
fennel for me, builder's for you.
Two of everything,
bowls, cups, spoons,
one jug of milk,
one jug of orange juice, two glasses.
Gently exploding oatmeal hissing
in its pot upon the stove.
Headlines scream of death and discord,
a people bleeding in the name of God;
warring factions proclaim the justice of their cause.
Freedom and what to do with it,
if only we knew the way.
Peace a distant dream,
fervently prayed for, rarely achieved.
Your tread upon the stairs,
announces your descent.
a dog's tail thumps the floor in ecstasy.
The kitchen, warm and welcoming,
the table waiting for the two of us.
I turn my my head towards you,
look into your face,
we smile.
You run your hand over my shoulder.
'Good morning love', 'Good morning'.
A shaft of sunlight breaks the gloom.
The day begins.
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Now that's a valentine!! :):)
ReplyDeleteSo real and so beautiful :o)
ReplyDelete... I also loved 'a dog's tail thumps the floor in ecstasy'.
Happy Valentines Day!
Such warmth. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your Valentine ;-)
Such beautiful thoughts!
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's day to you both
Hugs
SueAnn
That is just so touching, Friko. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOff now to buy my wife lunch. (You pricked a guilty spot.)
Nice poem! It brings out the contrast between public and private life so well. And beautiful flowers - did you buy those for him?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I wonder if he reads your blog, must do --- otherwise you would have written it on a piece of paper for him.
ReplyDeleteWonderful description. You took us there and so many of the scenes touch us all as they are somewhat common at this stage in our lives. Great job on taking that true love thing full circle. My word verification is "captive." How cool!
ReplyDeleteIn my post-influenza weakness, I got all weepy over this. Lovely, Valentine, lucky people.
ReplyDeleteVery nice and so much more appealing than the satin hearts and over-priced bouquets.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful. "A shaft of sunlight breaks the gloom. The day begins." Indeed.
ReplyDeleteBravo! Well done. It's amazing how similar our morning's are, only it's me getting up first with the dogs.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely and romantic. The imagery and sounds are so real. Happy Valentine's Day, Friko!
ReplyDeleteDearest Friko,
ReplyDeleteYour Beloved is a very lucky man ...
Have a Blessed Valentine's Day.
A wonderful Valentine. Love and relationship summed up in a few beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteSweet. Comfortable love.
ReplyDeleteThis is the best Valentine's poem I have read, probably ever. I just love it. Happy Valentine's Day, dear Friko!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou do have a gift of words. Jim
ReplyDeleteHi Friko - brilliant - I just loved reading it .. especially Benny's thumping tail .. have a wonderful day - the three of you!! Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU AND BELOVED!!! Aloha from Hawaii.
ReplyDeleteJust when I was feeling a bit irritated at all the red hearts I came to your post and .....melted. That's our kind of valentine but I couldn't have written it like you did. That's love.
ReplyDeleteThe best ever - you have captured a moment we often take for granted with each other.
ReplyDeleteoh sigh
ReplyDeletesuch beautiful lines
and yes...the best kind of love
quiet love of the everyday
cheers to you sweet romantic Friko
big smiles....love the little wander of your thoughts in the middle to peace...and the gentle good morning you end on...have a lovely valentines day...
ReplyDeleteYour small circle of love in the midst of a warring world reveals all that is lovely. Beautiful, Friko. The very best Valentine!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful way to start any day !
ReplyDeleteRecognizing the value in each other, and acknowledging it, is the greatest Valentine of all.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful, true poem. If only your small bubble of peace could spread around the globe.
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's Day to you and your Beloved!
Your moments of reflection touch my moments and bring your gift to me - a smile.
ReplyDeleteXO
WWW
A lovely Valentine, and the flowers are lovely too. Dianne
ReplyDeleteSweet, Happy Valentine!
ReplyDeleteAh, this is so touchingly beautiful Friko. Ain't love grand! Tears in the eyes.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have a romantic man. What a nice bouquet.
ReplyDeleteGreetings,
Filip
A beautiful valentine and a wonderful poem in every way. You two are lucky to have one another. Happy Valentines from across the pond!
ReplyDeleteOooh, what a lucky man he is!
ReplyDeleteDear Friko,
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely. I couldn't bring up the image, but the poem gave me so many images of love and devotion.
Peace.
A bit misty here. Thank you, that was lovely.
ReplyDeleteA special love song, Friko. In our common ways of everyday, perhaps we show the world the meaning of love. Happy Valentine Day to you!
ReplyDeleteWhat an honour it must have been to live such a moment.
ReplyDelete(Ich werde über einen neutralen Kommentar über die Situation denken, danke für die Anregung.)
Two of everything,
ReplyDeletebowls, cups, spoons,
one jug of milk,
one jug of orange juice, two glasses.
Gently exploding oatmeal hissing
in its pot upon the stove.
You've captured so elegantly the extraordinary beauty of an "ordinary" morning.
May every day begin for your and yours in just this way.
Happy Valentine's Day to you both.
"Grow old along with me, the best is yet to be...." Sounds like you've reached the best part. Makes me wish my other half were not so far away....
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this Friko!
ReplyDeleteHappy love day to you and yours.
The simple things to tell one another we are loved. I am glad you have each other.
ReplyDeleteღ˚•。* ♥ ˚ ˚✰˚ ˛★* ღ˛° 。* °♥ ˚• ★ *˚.ღ 。*˛˚ღ •˚ ˚JUST SPRINKLING A LITTLE BIT OF LOVE ON YOUR BLOG!! ~♥~˚ ✰* ★˚. ★ *˛ ˚♥* ✰。˚ ˚ღ。* ˛˚ ♥ 。✰˚*
I'm certain, Friko, even if there were no surprises, you and your beloved (and Benno) had a lovely February 14.
ReplyDeleteK
Love the gentle pace of this post. Hope you both had a good day.
ReplyDeleteYour words make me ache with, memories of love lost but not forgotten.
ReplyDeleteI could not read the whole thing until today, now im feeling more robust!
Gentle and thoughtful.... but Oh so strong.
This is what keeps the world turning, and why we put our feet down on the floor every morning out of bed. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteI find little practical lessons that help with the rigors of every day living here. ...& then also some abstract airy advice too.
ReplyDeleteNot that you are giving advice, but perhaps I am looking for it ;o.
Now that's what real love is all about. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteA nicely painted vignette.
ReplyDeleteSo nice to see the Cranky Crone here, since I also live alone. Valentine's day can be complicated. It's not the absence of flowers and chocolate that stings, but the absence of the two of everything.
ReplyDeleteStill, life goes on, and it's pure delight to have your vision of it to enjoy.
One of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. So moving. What a gift.
ReplyDeleteStrong but gentle; universal but intimate. Heady stuff. Words and photo have filled my space with light. Thanks, Friko.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, beautiful post, Friko. Hope your Valentine's Day was as wonderful as this was.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Friko. The perfect Valentine.
ReplyDeleteLove it! I loathe the VD hype and senseless sentiment - give me something real like this any day!!
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful. A poem of true love; the love of a married couple who know and respect each other. That's love.
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful and inspiring to see such love and devotion. Happy Valentine to both of you.
ReplyDeletesigh...
ReplyDelete'Gently exploding oatmeal hissing
ReplyDeletein its pot upon the stove.'
:) :) :) :) :) :)
Read this while listening to Jayne's Max playing the guitar.
Cried.
(Could eat those flowers.)
xxx
This is lovely... It sounds like our mornings - I hope you both had a lovely day.
ReplyDeleteThankyou for visiting my blog. It's good to meet you too.
Love is so special. So simple and touching..
ReplyDeletewow!... sehr berührend in jeder Hinsicht! Grossartig!
ReplyDeleteDir einen sehr schönen Tag und auf bald!
Renée
The sheer number and wealth of comments shows you've got something really special. Blessings
ReplyDeleteWhat a loving moment.
ReplyDeleteThank you for well expressing what I feel.
ReplyDeleteAgain.