Sunday, 8 January 2012

Anachronism x Two



Image: Lee Friedlander



Why do you stand there,
looking down your nose at me;
in your fancy coat and knee breeches,
hands folded piously.
What are you doing in this world
of tall buildings, 
traffic fumes,
eyeless windows,
flashing images and
bleached skies.
This is my world,
your day has long gone.
Standing on your pedestal,
lifeless and immobile,
your presence here forgotten, overlooked, 
frozen in time,
with birds alighting on your shoulders
your only company.
What use are you.
You're nothing but a memory.




Why do you hang there,
beetle-browed and scowling down at me,
your shiny head
and pale visage
depicted on a poster.
No pedestal for you.
You're here today and gone tomorrow,
 the next-in-line already 
waiting in the wings,
as easily replaced as you.
I once was real, a man of flesh and blood,
you're nothing but a made-up storyline,
a flickering image on a silver screen,
unreal, pure invention.
My place in history is safe, 
I shall be standing here
until the cityscape itself comes to an end.
My shoulders will provide a perch for birds 
from which to sing,
When you are but a memory.




   

48 comments:

Suze said...

Fantastic!

My esteemed Friko, you've a gift for capturing both the enduring and the absurd -- and, I suppose, that which is comprised of both.

Pondside said...

One of those images that makes one think - but it takes your gift to put the thought into something thought-provoking. Loved it!

Kay L. Davies said...

Wonderful, Friko. You see so many things others might miss, and say so much in so few words. I constantly admire your skill.
K

Kay said...

totally amazing,,i am in awe!! x

kaykuala said...

A clever way of not saying the obvious. It takes great talent to do that. Great verse Friko!

Hank

Perpetua said...

Oh I do like that, Friko! The shock of the unexpected and the turning of tables. Wonderful.

Sharla Greenway said...

What a great idea! Love it!

DCW said...

Nicely done.

Brian Miller said...

you are nothing but a made up storyline...and i used to be a real man...nice pairing of lines...there are some days i wonder if i am not in someones storyline...smiles.

Ms. Geek Goddess said...

Hilarious take on the prompt. Love it! Something that I never would have thought of. :)

Susan Scheid said...

Oh, this is rich! The photograph is splendid, yet I do believe you've topped it with your verse. Brava!

Vicki Lane said...

So nicely imagined!

Beth said...

Excellent!!

schmidleysscribblins,wordpress.com said...

He/She/It may be of no use, but still around the corner or up the block i fear. Dianne

The Elephant's Child said...

Thank you.

lifeonthecutoff said...

Wonderful, Friko! This read to me like a conversation; two men, each full of himself, boasting and strutting. You are an amazing writer and poet. Well done.

Dee Ready said...

Dear Friko,
Topsy-turvy that's what you do to the misconceptions and preconceptions that I bring to the photograph. Thank you.

Your post made me wonder about a world in which all the posters and statues and buildings and cars--those things that seem to have no voice--must be speaking to one another with sounds that I cannot hear and words that remain hidden to me. An alternate Universe in which inanimate things play out their life. A strange thought prompted by your words.Thank you for that also.

Peace.

Windsmoke. said...

Very enjoyable indeed :-).

Mr. Charleston said...

Bravo!

esbboston said...

&^)

Michelle My Bell said...

WOW Friko!!!! Very well done! Loved it!

gigihawaii said...

hmmm. I don't know about you, but I loved Yul Brynner in The King and I. He is an icon and that role was his to keep. Enjoyed the "conversation" between the two men.

Wisewebwoman said...

I don't know why I have this or who gave it to me but I have a picture of Yul in da nude. Magnificent.
I love your take on these symbolic relics.
XO
WWW

Kathy, the Single-minded Offshoot said...

Perfection!

SmitoniusAndSonata said...

Maybe , somewhere , there's a statue of Yul Brynner overlooked by a poster to an exhibition about the life and times of Statue Man ?

Don't Feed The Pixies said...

i didn't even know there was a statue of Yul Brenner!

Seriously - excellent poem

SueAnn said...

So clever and excellent!!
Hugs
SueAnn

Mama Zen said...

Great take on the prompt!

Susie Clevenger said...

Love it! So original...

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Excellent observations on life Friko.

Anna :o]

Kathe W. said...

excellent- you make me smile with your cleverness!

Anne said...

I enjoyed reading that and I loved the picture. Good work, Friko!

shoreacres said...

Fact confronting fiction, in a variety of ways!

Kudos to you, and also to the photographer who first saw, and snapped!

KleinsteMotte said...

That's a brilliant piece of work along side the photo :)

zongrik said...

just a big big stare down, that's what i say

days of cohan

June said...

...and neither one noticed, day in, day out, by the people living their daily lives...

You've grasped something here that not everyone would touch.

Dave King said...

Dishy. I oohed and ahhed over this one.

Ruth said...

A very nice conceit. Well done.

jabblog said...

Neither of them seems particularly happy, though;-)

Carolina said...

So... even on paper or in bronze we (humans) still want to pick a fight? Not a nice thought. Makes a nice post though ;-)

Nance said...

Yul Brenner can't last past another generation, but, oh!, this one is gloriously stuck with him.

Very strong, Friko.

Vagabonde said...

Original and imaginative piece.

FrankandMary said...

Thanks. This left me sparking with some new ideas. ~Mary

Nicholas V. said...

Great take on these two men hanging "up high", Friko.

Rita said...

You are poetry! :)

Helen said...

You've taken verbal sparring to a new level ...

Tumblewords: said...

Powerful!

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